Sunday, August 5, 2012

[Duty work] Diamante Poem


 Today, I'll write about my Diamante Poem. I think it will be very simple problems, but I think it can be the serious problems. Thanks.

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Global warming
Hot  World end
Heating   Melting   Scaring
Human      bears      Cool       Machine
Cooling      Using     destroying
Good  Classroom
Air conditioner
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4 comments:

  1. Won-Woo ChungAugust 5, 2012 at 11:25 PM

    Hi William. I'm Won-Woo your Writing TA. I see that you wrote a diamante poem to tell how serious global warming is. You used some good nouns to describe both global warming and air conditioner. However, if you wanted to make global warming look more outstanding, you could use a very opposite subject to global warming such as Ice Age. :)

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    1. UnknownAugust 6, 2012 at 6:26 AM

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    2. UnknownAugust 6, 2012 at 6:27 AM

      Thanks for your Comment Won-woo TA ^^

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  2. Dabin's MomAugust 6, 2012 at 2:31 AM

    I can see how desperately you want an air conditioner in the classroom although you worry about the global warming^^

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