[Duty work] Chain Writing

Chain Writing

Class 15 Students 

 

 I remember the day when I bought my new cellphone. My old cellphone was broken. My old cellphone was Galaxy S. And now, I change to Vega LTE. I was exciting that I bough LTE phone. It was my birthday! And I can remember more clean than other events. Also, it was big and fast. Well, I miss my last phone too but I like my new phone better.

 

 For the first few days I was super happy! It's clean and I though 'I will take care of this carefully. I will never drop, scratch, and I will clean it with a tissue everyday!' I hated others touching my phone, but now it's okay.

 

 But terribly, I dropped my new cellphone into the toilet water. During shower, I put my phone on the shelf but it slipped down to the toilet. I got it out at once. But it was already broken. I finished  shower and I dried it and tried to fix it but, it was still not working. I couldn't say to my parents. So, I decided to not talk about it, and just lie 'I was tripped by a kid and I fell in to the water!' Then it won't be my fault because, the kid tried to trip me down. I thought I was a genius

 I tried my plan to my parents today. But, my parents wasn't that stupid! Than I thought. My parents said " Where is that kid? We should tell that kid to pay for this phone!" And I felt my hands sweating and my head going white. I said " Um.... Th..That b..boy was really m....mean. So he wouldn't...p...pay!" And my parents gave me auspicious look. They said, "William, Are you  lying?" I said "Absolutely Not! I would never tell lie! How can I possibly lie to you!" My parents signed "Well, is that kid is from your class?"

 

 I tried my best to make my parents not notice who the face kid is. So, I said "Nope, if that kid was in my class, I would like to told to our homeroom teacher about it. But I don't know who is that kid or what class is that kid. Also, I don't know that kid name. Absolutely, I don't know anything!" 

 My parents were still suspicious of me. They said " You remember that kid's face, right? We know that you're good at looking at faces and remembering it. We'll search about him through your school website." I didn't have anything to say. Because, it was true. I hesitated, I thought that I'll be in a big trouble now! I said "Mom...  by true heart-"

-Fine-

*You might think this story has no conclusion but This when you see at my next post, You'll know the next story*

[Duty work] Reflective Essay (NOT DONE)

 The video 'Spring' is about the guy who have been rude to others. And that guy have a same punishment too. Do you think the punishment was okay or Not okay. Think about it while you look this video.

Did you enjoy this video. I think you don't enjoy it. Because they are some disgusting parts. For example, Snakes death. I think this punish was okay because it was a rule for the Buddhism's rule has that law. 'Get the same punishment that you have done'
 Next I'll tell my similar experience. When I was in GLPS, one TA cough me  because of the game. But, I did not do the game. I just miss touch my icon so it enters the game. The TA came that time. When I was going to turn off the game. ㅠㅠ It is so sad. Because My Cell phone have to handout for 1week...... I can't call to my mother. She didn't know my phone is in TA's hand. I think my mom will be very worried because I did not sign the call. HA~~ I'm worried about my last 1 week. I think GLPS should give my cell phone back. I have to get my cell phone before the Closing Ceremony! That is so.........

This is my experience about the bad punishment that I have. Do you ever had the bad punishment or very sad punishment? I think I have one...

[Optional and Duty work] Gangnam style video

This is the video of Gangnam style!

[Optional] No.1/ Write about you!

 Today, I'll introduce myself. In my first post, I have some interesting truth about me! They had one Lie and Two Truth. Do you remember. But today, I'll tell all factors about me^^ I'll start to introduce my self and my life In GLPS!
 First, I'll introduce myself. You'll know my name is William. I am in the Class 15 and my writing teacher is Mr. Garrioch. He is very kind. Next, I'm having fun at KMLA. because of GLPS, I came to KMLA. I think it is the very interesting experience to me. Because, I came KMLA first time! I think it will be very old and dirty, But it isn't! Next, my favorite TA is my History TA! He is very kind. He has very smooth voice!
 I'll tell the GLPS's life. It is just like regular school, But we are sleeping at school for 30 days. I can make Roommates and Classmates. It can be the good experience who want to make many friends. I get up at 7 am. Often, I went for the breakfast at 7:02 am. But in Sunday, We have to clean our room(dormitory) to 7:30. After 7:30, we can have our breakfast. Next, when we finish eating breakfast, I started to wait until 7:50. Because in 7:50, Floor Master PA will handout our Cellphones. All morning, I'm waiting to have my Cellphone. Next is not that busy. We have to go to our advisor class until 8:30. We have a lot of time to play with Roommates! It is my favorite time. Next we do 1,2,3,4 period. We have 45 minute class and 15 minute break. Why we have so long breaks? Because, we have to move to other classroom as like Dasan , Cungmu, Gym , English Building or etc. It is very far to go to Dasan to English Building. Dasan is near to Cungmu. But English  Building is near by Dormitory.  When we finish 1,2,3,4 Period. We go up to dormitory to have lunch. Grade 6 have to eat at 13:05. Our KMLA food is very yummy!(But it don't have ramen ㅠㅠ.) Next we can rest until 2:15. After that time we have to move to our 5 period class until 2:30. Next is same as last, we have to spend 5,6,7 period. When our class is all finish. We get up to dormitory and eat lunch at 5:35. After this we can play until 6:50. When its over we have to give our Cellphones to Floor Master PA and ready to do self-study period. Self-study period is until 7:00 PM ~ 9:00 PM. After 9:00 PM. We can eat bread and milk in cafeteria. After this, we can choose. You will sleep at 10:3O or study until 11:40 in 11th floor. and sleep at 12:00. I almost choose 2nd choice. Because I have many things to do ㅠㅠ.
 Next, I'll tell my opinion about this busy timeline. I think it is not that busy than you though or I though. Do you know when you go to camp, the time goes very fast. and you have to study harder than you though. It will be the hard things to promise
 This is end of my self-introduction and Thanks for GLPS students And TAs or PAs. Special Thanks to Mr, Garrioc

[Optional and Duty] Upload my History presentation hand out

This is the First page of my History presentation. Sorry for not having the all of the Handouts. Internet speed is too slow that I can't connect to my email ㅠㅠ! 

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Handouts for Audience

Orful Olimpicks

Class 15/ Attendance No.4 / William Ju

Stratford                                       

Stratford-upon-Avon is a market town and civil parish in south Warwickshire, England. It lies on the River Avon, 22 miles (35 km) south east of Birmingham and 8 miles (13 km) south west of Warwick

Shin-kicking                                                                 

Shin-kicking, also known as purring is a combat sport that involves two contestants attempting to kick each other on the shin to force their opponent to the ground. It has been described as an English martial art.

Hammer Trowing                                     

The modern or Olympic hammer throw is an athletic throwing event where the object is to throw a heavy metal ball attached to a wire and handle. The name "hammer throw" is derived from older competitions where an actual sledge hammer was thrown. Such competitions are still part of the Scottish Highland Games, where the implement used is a steel or lead weight at the end of a cane handle.

Glossary

Maritial

Martial, was a Latin poet from Hispania. He wrote a total of 561, of which 1,235.

[Optional] No.2/ Upload your speech

 Today, I'll talk about my speech. Even my speech is fail, But I think It's better to upload here^^ Enjoy my speech. 

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Speech Contest Script

Class 15/William Ju

Do you know about the Iphone and Galaxy? I think you’ll know. Some of you will have Iphone or Galaxy. Today, I’ll talk about these things call ‘Cell Phone’. Hello? My name is William and I’m from class 15. I like to tell the table of the contents. First, I’ll talk about the kinds of the Cell phones. Next, I’ll talk about the advantage and disadvantage about each cell phones. Third, I’ll compare Iphone and Galaxy. Here the Iphone is ‘Iphone 4S’ and the Galaxy is ‘Galaxy S3’.

 First, I like to say about the different Kind of Cell phones. For the first kind of the cell phone is just Regular phone. In regular phones they have Folder, Slide, and Touch. I’ll give you some examples of these phones. For the Folder phone, they have Ice-cream 2. It came out at 2008,December. For next its Slide phone. For the slide phone, my example is Motorola Quick Slide phone. And the last, example is Cookie phone. This phone was my old cell phone. For my review of this phone, I think this phone has very good programs to use as the child. I’ll move on to the next kinds of cell phone. The next cell phone is SMART PHONES. I think all of you will know what is ‘Smart phone’. When you don’t know I hope you’ll learn this time. Smart phone is the phone, which can download applications and can use 3G or 4G. For the Smart phones, I’ll give you two base examples. First will be the Galaxy S3. It is the most newer model in Samsung Company. Do you want to buy this? But when you here this phone, your think can be different. It’s Iphone4S. It is the phone that is the newest model in Apple too. And I’ll talk about Iphone 5, because It came out at in Korea at September!

The Iphone 5 will have 4 CPUs, so It will be almost same speed with, Galaxy S3.

 For next I’ll tell the advantages and disadvantage about Smart phone and Regular phone. Smart phone can download apps but regular phones can’t. But regular phones can have more confidence, because smart phones have to keep carefully. But regular phones can be more confidence. Think about you are having the smart phone. Do you think you can just run fast when there is Galaxy S3 in your pocket? This will be different for the people opinion. But I think I can’t run because I am keep thinking about my new smart phone.

 For the third step, I’ll compare Galaxy S3 and Iphone 4S. First, I’ll tell the advantage of Galaxy S3. For the first reason, Galaxy have more wide screen than Iphone 4S. That means, we can see more widely. Second, Galaxy has SUPER AMOLAD + Screen. But Iphone is just Retina display. And S3 has quad core but Iphone has dual core. It means that S3 has more CPU. For one sentence. ‘It is more fast!’. Next, I’ll talk about Iphone 4S’s advantage. First, It has seri. Galaxy also have S-voice. But S-voice can’t understand the voice clearly. So seri is more better than S-voice. Second, It has more apps. The camera has more fancy graphics than S3. Also we can picture easier than S3 because we can just picture it, when we press one button at home screen. But Samsung Galaxy S3     have to unlock and find Camera app. It takes more time than pushing the one button.

 For last, I’ll tell my opinion. In my think I think Apple Iphone is much better, because It have seri and more fancy graphic of camera. Also, In case, they have more apps and more games! I think having the smart phones and having the Regular phone, has many differences. But in my opinion We don’t have to be that serious about having the Reuglar phone. When you are not happy with your phone. Make you feel happier. It is your job to be happier. Do you think it is easy to buy your cell phone. No Way! Your parents are working hard to give happiness to you! I think every audience have to give thanks to your parents.

 This is end of my speech about the Cell phones. And all the audience and teacher, I hope you enjoy my speech and Have a nice day in GLPS! 

[Duty work] Diamante Poem

 Today, I'll write about my Diamante Poem. I think it will be very simple problems, but I think it can be the serious problems. Thanks.

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Global warming

Hot  World end

Heating   Melting   Scaring

Human      bears      Cool       Machine

Cooling      Using     destroying

Good  Classroom

Air conditioner

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[Duty work] Kony 2012

 Hello to GLPS 18th students and TAs        or Teachers? My name is William Ju. And today, I'll talk about KONY 2012. I think all of you saw KONY 2012 VIDEO. It was a very depressing things, Because, there was a sad Parts. I'll talk about the Kony's Bad things and Good things about the Kony 2012 Videos and campaign. Also, When you want to look at the KONY 2012 video scroll to the bottom of this post. You'll find the video. When you want to go to the KONY 2012 WEB SITE, click the word    KONY! . Whats your think, however, My think is to remove KONY. Because, He killed Jacobs Brother and all most 90%of children in Africa. Do you think We need to kill Kony or not. That will be your choice. But, I think US government have to Kill or send it to Jail.

 First, I'll tell about Joseph Kony. He is the Guy who Lead the LRA. He kills many child. How the Joseph Kony collect the Child? They Kidnapped the Child and say " Kill your parents or you'll die!" So when they kill there parents the Kony Bring the Child to the Military place and give them a gun to fight and clothes to wear. Do you think this is Okay to World. What is the UN doing! Also the Citizens are trying to stop Kony. As like the KONY 2012 Campaign. When you want to join the KONY 2012 Campaign. Click 'Join Campaign" (Join Campaign) .

 Second, I'll tell you about the KONY 2012 Campaign. The Kony 2012 Campaign is started with the One man. But, in today they have 104,506,332 peoples to help to catch Kony. Do you think it is possible to Catch Kony? Yes, they would. The Obama truly sign to catch Kony. And Invisible Children is Keep talking with the UN to     have some helps to catch Joseph Kony. But that is not easy, Because, Most of the people do not know Who is Kony. So, I one sentence, 'Kony is not Famous!' So, they have to open this campaign "Kony 2012" They will spread the Posters and AD in all the cities and Countries. Also in the Newspapers. Do you think it can be success. I hope to Success, Because that will be the last chance to catch Kony.

 Lastly,I'll tell you about the importance about the Kony 2012 Campaign. For the reasons, First, they will give freedom for the African child. And Africa will not have the secret Military service, because, they can  be scared of the US government and the UN. Second, the KONY 2012 is the most  biggest Campaign ever in the Citizens Group. They are like NGO(Non-Government-Organization). Kony should be catch because when we fail to catch Kony, Almost everyone in the world will be very sad or scared about the war of the Kony's Military. Do you think Kony will be stand and just look at the dying solders? No way! They will revenge to US or the UN! Even in the World. That means our Korea could be in danger. So, Let's Give them a Chance to catch the Kony. When you are scared about the revenge, you are not the Korean Guys. When you stared to Cheer up the Kony 2012 Campaign, You have to cheer them up for the end!!!!!!!! When you finish working in the middle, YOU WILL BE PUNISHED OF THE JUDGE! 

 This is all about the KONY 2012 Campaign and when you want to look up the Kony sites or Cheer up them click 'WE ARE THE WINNER!"  (WE ARE THE WINNER!) . Thanks for reading, TAs or Mr. Garrioch and students. Have a nice day! 

             "We can catch Kony!"

[Optional] No.4/ Poetry!

 Hello, Everyone in GLPS writing Bloggers and Mr. Garrioch? My name is William Ju and I'm in the Class 15! Today I'll talk about my Poetry. Do you want to hear my beautiful Poetry? When you want to hear, Read!
 Oh and I'll make a music+poetry next week. When you want to enjoy, Please come to my blog at next week too~
 I'll add my picture later. Because I'm running out my time^^

Teddy Bear

-by  William Ju

Where are you?

Teddy Bear

Your like my pillow 

and you was my bodyguard

Where are you?

Teddy Bear

Your like my brother

and you was my friend

Where are you?

Teddy Bear

You was my only

Non-living thing

I love♥

[Optional and Duty work] Upload my favorite video

This is a video named 'Dear sister'. You might look as killing people, But, It is a GAG!
Have a nice day ^^

GLPS 18 Writing Program: Extra Writing Assignments

GLPS 18 Writing Program: Extra Writing Assignments

When you click the Blue underlined word, you could see an Extra writing Assignments

[Optional] No.9/ A Letter to my younger self

Dear. My younger self

 Hello, my younger self? I'm your older self. This time I am in KMLA CAMP called "GLPS"

I want to tell you the test answers of your age, But I can't remember all those except when I am really smart. 

 My younger self I want to tell some wisdom to fight against your future. When your parents said

"Do your homework", Just do it! Do not reply on it! Did you understand? Also, when your teacher said, "Do page 29 to 35!" Write down your homework. So, you can't miss it. When we miss your homework, You will get red card(In school). Finally, you have to check your assignment twice! Because, In these day, when you don't check twice, You will get a problem.

 I want to tell you about something Important. First, I'll tell them how to do, when you  or I has a serious problem. Example is When I went to 2011 winter ski camp in school, I'll said, "Don't Sleep with Kung Rock" Because, he broke glasses in the door, so I have to get a surgery. But, when we sleep with others, You'll go to water park and play as much you can or ski as you much can. 

 Next, I'll tell about the GLPS. Because, when they know what is GLPS is, they can go to more higher levels or good presentation. Also, when our younger self knows about GLPS, they will know what they're doing in future, So, they could ready for the Camp or quickly so, I can come at fifth grade. I think it is too late to come at sixth grade. So my opinion is to go GLPS more faster than now. So, we can improve our English Skill more quickly

 I think memorizing this 3 things can change me and yours future. My younger self have a good day! And I hope there will be one month to go GLPS!

From. Your future self

[Duty work] Ode to Fan and Yellow cards

Dear, Fan

 Hello, Fan? I'm the fan of the fan.                                                                                    
Fan, I love. you! How can you have that cool air?                                                            
I want to have that cool air in my body now.                                                                        
I want to be you You are too cool!                                                                                    So, I forget the hot. I feel thanks to you.                                                                            

 Sadly, I can't use you during the GLPS camp.
But, PAs and TAs can use you. But we can't.
I am missing you. I want to take you.
Your cool air can refresh my body and mind.

 When I meet you, I'll be much happier than ever in other days.
When you tired of doing your works for PAs and TAs,
you can come to me!  I'll protect you from PAs and TAs from you.
I have a question to you. How can you be that cool?
When you are near by me, I can feel the cool air coming
out in your body.

 I want to give thanks to you. Because, you worked hard to me. But, I don't give to you
any thing. So, I want to give you the thanks to you. I love you Fan.
Remember, I'm your fan! Bye!

From, William Ju

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Dear, Yellow Card

 Hello, Yellow card, the bad things to students in GLPS.

My name is William Ju, the students of class 15 in GLPS.

I got a Yellow Card in  July,28. 

Because, I don't turn off the light in Dormitory room.

But, I was innocent that I turned off the light, 

when I go out. When we are back to eat lunch.

Their was a note said " Come to 306 and get your yellow card."       

I was very upset that I was innocent but PAs do not listen.

All of my Roommates were sad, because, they got a Yellow card too.

That they was a Popsong Contest day. I was so sad that I can't sing

or dance in Popsong Contest.
 Yellow Card, why are you born? I really hate you! You give the
hurt for other peoples and students. Are you happy about
students sadness?
 I know I was so rude to you! But, I is the truth about yourself. I think you should think
about yourself once more time. I hope there are no students get yellow cards.

                                  
                                                  

[Optional] No.5/ Review the TED Video

  Optional Extra Assignments/No.5 [Review the TED VIDEO]

Today, I'll talk about the one of the TED video I saw. I saw a TED video called 'Sebastian Thrun: Google's driverless car'. It is the great invention in Google I think. I'll review this video In Next paragraph. This video contains many video that Google tried to make a Driverless car. We can Drive Confortable than drive every way through. The driverless car has a camera in the top of the car. It search for rocks that annoying their tracks to go. This camera is not a common camera. It have a lazer scan for save. Also, they have sensors to feel the land and stop the car themself. When we can stop car without using our foot or our hands. It can be more confortable who can't drive well. As like Women drivers.

[This video is about the Inside of the driverless car]

Did you see the video? You want to say wow! Isn't it? But now it is every expensive. Becasuse, this car contains many new machines that didn't came out yet.                                                                                                   

 Next, this TED video contains many jokes so everyone can enjoy it. When I first see this video, I can understand easier than other TED videos because It is about the cars and IT improvement. I don't really know others hobby or favorite is... But I think everyone can enjoy. Do not be scared to watch the talking CEO video 'TED'. It can be more good for your skills of speaking and listen to others. This TED video is easier than other news programs like 'BBC or CCTV".

 Lastly, this video contains lots of information in it. So, we can study while we watch this video. It can be a good chance to get English skills and Information. Also, This video had worldwide news. So, we are learning about what outside is happening or the improvement of the IT. 

 This is all about my Optional Extra Assignment/No.5 [Ted videos] In Last, I'll upload the TED video that you can see it. Have the nice day, all the students, Mr. Garrioch, and all the writing TAs.

[Duty Work] About Myself

 Hello? My name is William Ju and I am the student In 18th in GLPS in KMLA. I'll talk about myself. Before I start to introduce myself, I have a Quiz. "There is 1 lie in my introduction. Find that lie! When you find the lie, Leave the comments." When you leave your GLPS class and your name. We can be a great friend. I'll Start to Introduce myself. Please read all my post.There are one more point to say. Please Leave your comment! This is my hard work in GLPS writing class. When you don't leave the comment, I'll be really sad ㅠㅠ

 First, I like to draw pictures.     I am really good at drawing. And my dream is to be an artist. Why I like to draw? Because, I have a lot of fun and It can help to improve my drawing(art) skill improve. Also, I am attending a drawing club in My school. I am the Master of it. Lastly, I won the  Seoul Art competition for Elementary student. The topic was   'Family" It was a great topic to me. Because, I love my family.

 Second, I have my blog open. You can come and leave comments for me! We can be a good friend for each other. In July 28, My blog was Opened. Remember my blogs Birthday. Because, We'll have an event on My blogs birthday. Also, We'll have event in              "First Week day!" Please visit my blog in week later. I have just 1 blog for me. I deleted my old one                                                                            

 Third, My class advisor is Cadee Lee.        She is very kind. Also, she is my history teacher too. I like Cadee teacher, because she is nice, kind and also her class has a lot of fun. So I can enjoy her class. Her office is in 다산관(D). In 다산관(D), Her office is in the first floor. I'll study there for 4weeks.                                                                            

        

  This is all about myself. I want to tell you about my point One more time. "There is 1 lie in my introduction. Find that lie! When you find the lie, Leave the comments."

This post was my first post. BYE BYE!